Welcome to Friday Fictioneers where each week close to 100 people participate in a flash fiction challenge based on a photo prompt.
This week’s photo: Copyright: Janet Webb
And now my 100 word story:
Wine always made her giddy; giddy in a way that men adored. Her latest fling was a record breaker. They had been together 8 months. He was annoying but the sex was fantastic and he was an awesome cook.
He made a light Italian meal for their first (and only) Valentine’s Day together. He had learned she was friskier on a stomach barely coated with food and laced with alcohol.
They finished their first bottle and he stored their last course for later. He would need the time to recharge.
Sangria, strawberries, and chocolate sauce, was the dessert of fantasies.
Dear Dawn,
Cold shower time. Cute with a side of racy. One word of crit. “Dessert” not “Desert”. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Lol…that does make a difference. One is dry and one…okay, I will fix it. Thanks so much.
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Dawn,
Wow, what a hot one. I can imagine them lounging around decadently in some Mediterranean villa. Sounds like quite a fantasy indeed. 🙂
-David
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Valentine’s Day = Fantasy; especially when you are single. It beats reality any day. Oooo lala 😉
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A Valentine Day’s special!
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Yum yum 🙂
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Saucy! Nice one.
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Thanks Sandra.
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this totally made me look forward to valentines day! strawberries and chocolate, perfect!
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Someone as young and beautiful as you, SHOULD look forward to Valentine’s Day.
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Ooooo baby! Definitely a great fantasy!!!
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That’s the only love life I have any more 😦
lol
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oh la la, reality never lives up to the fantasy, unfortunately 😉 Great job
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Aahhh that’s okay. I’m good with a love life that’s pure fantasy.
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Very descriptive and paints a vivid word picture to fit with Valentine’s Day.
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Air out your sexy nighties, Friday’s coming!
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The Whipped Cream? I’m looking for a chocolate sundae here! What’s all this sex stuff?
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I’m sorry Perry. Rochelle started it. A sundae does sound good. With nuts? I like mine with wet nuts, pecans you know.
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MMMMMM…. it’s been a while, but there was this one valentine’s day that involved truffles and wine….
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I remember that one! 😉
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Giddy in a way that men adored – ah, this says so much about her character, especially combined with her reaction to him being annoying. A nice little slice, this
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Thank you.
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Something about this photo brings out the erotic in some of us. 😉
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Rochelle started it!
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I might have to work that into my dreams tonight!
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Well, don’t forget the whipped cream 😉
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She must be a barrel of fun.
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Maybe not a barrel but at least a bottle. 😉
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🙂
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I wish my man could cook that delicious … nice story. 🙂
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The way to a woman’s “heart”. 😉
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Just don’t get any on you. 😉
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Well that’s no fun 😉
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Perfect Valentine-one should be this lucky 😉
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Him or her? Oh ever mind both are doing better than I am, haha
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Lol, if its a third party,either would be ok but if one of them is me,then obviously her 😉
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I’m not sure I’m old enough to read this. Vereeee good.
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Lol..thanks Patrick
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I absolutely fell in love with this portrayal of a frisky and exciting fantasy 🙂 mmm chocolate sauce sounds great.
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Indeed it does 🙂
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Good story Dawn! Nan
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Thanks Nan.
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Just envisioned this as part of an erotic novel. not bad
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I LOVE your imagination.
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I like the double viewpoint in this. And considering the air of doom that hangs over this relationship, ‘desert’ would have been equally appropriate (a pun on the relationship) with ‘dessert’. Now where’s the choco-strawbs. Must hide them for later. 🙂
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Thanks and yum that does sound good.
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It sounds like she has her own Boy Toy. “Oh Johnny, it’s time to rub the bunions.”
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My kinda guy! 😉
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I could see the little black dress, pumps and a sangria in hand with that lady. I wonder how high-maintenance she was. “Lord, what fools these mortals be.”
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Lol, not that high maintenance all she wants is sex, food, and wine.
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Oooh, steamy! I love it. Well done!
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Thank you.
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hubba-hubba! i’m a liking your passionate scene, Dawn. happy Valentine’s Day to you too. 😛
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Thank you Sun and also to you.
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Awesome title!
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Haha..thanks! 🙂
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Fifty shades of Friday Fictioneers. First and only valentine’s day? Hmm another story in there….
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Thank you!
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Wine made her giddy in the way that men adored! Great beginning to a decadent story, Dawn. Well done! 😀
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Thank you Linda.
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Whoot, this is hot and cute at the same time, makes one imagine a lot of things! Sure, the dessert does sound superb…. 😀
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Nice play.. I think they both had fun…
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Absolutely! 😉
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Really interesting opening.
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Thanks.
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