Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers uses a picture prompt and asks for stories between 75-175 words. Click here to read all the stories for this week.
This picture
Inspired my story:
As I watched my sister stroll away down the sidewalk leading out of our neighborhood my first instinct was to run after her. But it was raining and I wasn’t wearing any shoes and the baby was asleep in his crib and I wasn’t really sorry, so what would I say? Besides, she would be back. She had nowhere else to go.
My older sister considers herself an artist, and I suppose she is. She paints and draws wonderfully, does some sculpting, and writes short stories that often feel more autobiographical than the fiction she claims them to be.
That’s what most of our fights are about. She recently wrote a short story about an alcoholic abusive father. It’s how she describes our dad. But it’s not the dad I know and I told her that. She says I am too young to remember and that I block things out. She thinks she is so smart.
I remember what I want!
It’s so interesting how families/siblings recall different upbringings. It’s because they really did have different perspectives… Well done here! You capture real life.
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Thank you
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Nice story – siblings do remember everything so differently. All the best to you and your family over the holiday period
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Thank you Raewyn, same to you.
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Very nice story. Somewhere at some points I could relate to it. Nicely written.
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Thanks Indira, Merry Christmas
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Merry Christmas dear.
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Merry Christmas Dawn.
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Great story! I actually knew two sisters like this. One viewed the mom as the villain and the other the dad.
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Wow, isn’t that something?!
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Beautiful story. So real. We all remember what we want. That’s how we make it through life!
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Indeed!
Thanks for reading.
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That reminds me recently at my mother’s – I was telling her something I remembered from childhood and my sister butted in and said, “I DON’T REMEMBER THAT!” Well, it was my memory – not hers (and she was there when the event happened!) I guess your narrator is like my sister and remembers what she wants. LOL! Great story!
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Thanks PJ
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We do remember things differently and interpret thing differently based on our experiences. Lovely story
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Thank you.
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Nice story. I’m glad she chooses to remember the good side of their dad.
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Thank you. So funny, I was just preparing a post for this week’s FFFAW and typed your name for the photo credit and thought “I wonder who that is?”
Now I know!
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haha. I’m behind with my blogging after Winter break. Just realized after reading your comment that a picture of mine is up again. 😉 I sent those to PJ a while back, and it’s always a surprise to see them chosen.
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