Suzanne pulled into the convenience store to use the rest room. She had been on the road for hours when she spotted this throwback to a simpler time.
“Throwback to a simpler time. That is what I need” she thought looking back at her car crammed with her possessions.
She thought of her husband who would be coming home from work soon; angry that she hadn’t answered his calls or texts all day, furious not finding his dinner on the table, and then what, she wondered? How would he react when he saw all her things gone? She shuddered and hurried back to her car.
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Dear Dawn,
I hope he doesn’t go looking for her. Sounds like it could be ugly. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle.
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As many laughs as usual, Dawn.
You do these so well.
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Thanks ceayr. I’ve really felt like nothing i have contributed these last several weeks were worth reading. So in an effort to up my game, so to speak, i decided to go with the tried and true “Write what you know”. Its not great, but its better.
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Your stories are consistently good, Dawn. No worries there.
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Thank you Russell, you are very kind.
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Step on it, Susan! Nicely done.
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Thank you Louise.
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Better keep on moving I think. Nicely done, Dawn.
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Thank you Sandra.
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Good easy writing
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I think it’s better to leave… too soon to stop.
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Thanks Bjorn
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Good one Dawn – I like the idea of a throwback to simpler times, hope she gets away safely.
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Thanks Lain
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Yes, she best not lollygag too long there! Get as much distance as she can, I say.
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Thank you Dale
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This unusual place is her momentary refuge. I like the subtle way you told us about her circumstances.
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Thank you Emily
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He sounds a nasty sort. Keep driving, Suzanne!
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Absolutely!
Thanks Ali.
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I wonder how many runaways stopped off at that rest room. Hope she makes it.
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Thanks Lizy
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Nicely done Dawn.
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Thank you Indira.
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Oh My …. my comment erased because my computer shut down all on its own. ~~~ : – (
Sometimes, I feel it’s alive. ~~~~ : – O
It may be in cyberspace and how up later.
Anyway … YIKES !!! I could feel her fear. It’s best for her to hit the road fast.
Nicely done, Dawn.
Have a nice weekend.
Isadora 😎
p.s. don’t you hate those bathroom breaks when you’re on the road? UGH!!!
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LOL..yes..you never know what shape the bathroom will be in!
Thanks Isadora!
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I dunno, I feel a Psycho type twist coming on, though it’s not there yet.
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Good idea Perry!
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You portray her feelings really well. Hope he never catches up with her!
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Thank you
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Oh I do like this – instantly want to know more of her story and better still what adventures lie ahead.
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Thank you
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Keep running Suzanne! And don’t look back. Glad she was smart enough to leave town and start over again someplace new. Poor thing is still thinking about the “what ifs” as she is on the run. Nicely done.
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Thank you
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This is a story that makes one think, what if. And that makes it a great story. Mike
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Thank you Michael
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Perfect ending. “make your own dang dinner!” This made me laugh.
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Thank you 🙂
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Nicely done!
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Thank you
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Looks like she’s got to keep going and get as much distance between them as possible. He doesn’t sound like a man to cross
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Such a shame to be that kind of person, doncha think?
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Let’s hope she’s far enough away to hide for ever. He sounds like a nasty piece of work. Sad, but let’s hope she’s on her way to a better life 🙂
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Thank you Lynn
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My pleasure 🙂
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she can run but can’t hide for long. i bet he’d find her. 🙂
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Oh my…hope not.
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Maybe I’ve should have named my character Suzanne. Looks like everyone is in need of a potty stop.
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LOL
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I hope she continues the drive down the highway towards a better future. Nice one, Dawn.
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Thank you Amy
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Knowing the bits I know, it’s hard not to wonder, where these stories come from, Dawn? So intriguing! Well done!
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Thank you
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So sad, I hope she can escape him. Good story, Dawn.
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Thanks Gah
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It sounds like she’s leaving him for a good reason. You made the fear sound real, Dawn. Good writing. —- Suzanne
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