I hear my sisters swimming in the creek
I dive in but when I come up for air
All that remains is the echo of their laughter
There is a boy
I know he grows to be a fine young man
Becomes my husband, the father of my children
But I remember the boy who first kissed me
My eyes are closed and I can feel the fullness of his lips
When I open my eyes, the boy is gone
I see his shadow
With the children
They are playing in the yard
I call to them
But it is dark
The shadows have faded
And with them, my memory
PHOTO PROMPT © Jelli
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Wow! That was poignant. Like a view of Altzheimers conveyed well. Loved it. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you and for the inspirational photo.
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Shadows in a individuals memory. So sad.
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Thank you
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lovely
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Thank you Neil
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Lovely Dawn.
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Thank you Tracey
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Lovely.
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Thanks Indira
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Very sad and reflective, just right for the mood of the photo prompt.
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Thank you Sandra.
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Lovely flow here Dawn.
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Thank you
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Dear Dawn,
I would almost call this poetic injustice. Alzheimer’s is the cruelest disease. Well written and so poignant.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Great comment!
Thanks Rochelle.
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Lovely memories and also quite a sad piece.
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Thank you Ali.
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Memory can be such a trickster…
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My friend and I were having that very conversation recently.
Thnaks for reading!
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At the beginning I thought she was simply reminiscing, but that last line sent me down another path – to dementia, perhaps?
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Yes, that was my intent. Thanks so much for stopping by Liz.
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Beautiful melancholy feel in this. This is one of those stories that stays with you.
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Thank you for that most generous comment!
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I remember a song called Love in the Shadows. Beautiful poem, Dawn.
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Thank you Russell
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Beautiful and moving.
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Thank you
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Sad and beautiful, great writing, Dawn.
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Thank you
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I was in awe when I felt a tear fall as I finished reading your story.
Touching …
Isadora 😎
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Thank you Isadora, that was sweet of you to say.
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memories like shadows can be cruel sometimes. they tease you with their presence and then disappear as soon as they come.
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Yes…so sad…
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Very sad. Suffering from dementia must be a bit like existing in twilight and seeing an shooting star for a fleeting moment. Such moments of lucidity are to be treasured, however brief. You have done well with this piece of writing Dawn — the use of verse for each memory works well in portraying there shadowy presence.
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Thank you Sarah.
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What a beautiful piece, Dawn. I didn’t exactly read this as someone suffering from dementia. It seemed more about losing what once was, and like the shadow, being replaced by a kind of faded presence. Nice work.
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Thanks Amy
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Beautiful.
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Thank you
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Very moving and sad, memories are all that’s left and more so, they are just shadows
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Thank you
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