Friday Fictioneer: The Betrayal

Sam watched his family, unnoticed from his perch outside the kitchen. He could see the dad giving the boy advice and the mom fixing their dinner. He loved these people. He had lived with them his whole life and he would never do anything to harm them. Obviously they didn’t feel the same way about him and it broke his heart. When he saw the Pest Control van parked out front he knew what he had to do.

Sam sent word to a cousin down south and packed his bags. Without saying goodbye he left the only home he had ever known.

PHOTO PROMPT © Shaktiki Sharma
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93 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneer: The Betrayal

  1. An insect with a heart! You conveyed the feeling of sad betrayal nicely Dawn, and such an original twist on the prompt 🙂

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  2. Aw, poor Sam, facing that horrible realization that “his family” doesn’t feel the same about him. It’s always hard to learn who your friends aren’t. I’m glad he got away in time!

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  3. Poor Sam. You had me going there, Dawn. You know sometimes I feel pretty bad about bugs after I squash them. My son always rescues them though. I guess he didn’t get that from me. 🙂

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  4. Well, unlike in mine, at least Sam escaped, rather than finding himself on the bottom of a shoe with 1,000,000 times his weight pressing on him, helplessly squirming as life is pressed out of him.

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  5. Poor Sam, the rejection is heartbreaking. I like this as a nice little story but also it can be read as a bit of a metaphor where Sam represents those unfortunates that society just won’t let in and turns its back on. Nice work Dawn.

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  6. Aw, the poor critter. There he goes and adopts these people and then they want to kill him. Some people just don’t have hearts… fun and sweet story, Dawn. I love it.

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